The Lion King - First Draft

Yesterday we went to the Lion King movie and when we got to the Lion King movies we got to have a can of fizzy or water. We got our popcorn then too. We got to go on the seats and the movie went on.  We were watching my favourite characters Sarabi, Mufasa, Simba, Nala, Pumba and Scar.  

Mufasa was the Lion King. All of the beasts were running in the hole then Simba got stak. Mufasa came. Mufasa got Simba then Mufasa climed up but Scar pushed him off. Simba ran away then he went in the desert and he fell asleep. Some birds came then Pumba came running.  

After that they went to a jungle and Pumba said lets be friends, this is Simba.  Nala came then they had to go back home. Simba came too then he went to go and fight Scar. They were fighting the hyena then Simba had to fight Scar.  Simba pushed Scar off the rock then the hyena ate Scar. Now Simba is the Lion King and they had a baby. My favourite part was having popcorn and a can of fizzy. We went through the library then got on the bus to go  back to school. We had lunch and a play on the playground. 

Wonderful Sentences

I have been learning how to copy and paste from our class writing flip charts to share our learning. I know how to insert bullet points and use the highlighting tool.

We know that wonderful sentences need:

• detail (elaboration)
• capital letters and full stops
• Punctuation (, ! ? “ “)
• Quality vocab - WOW  words

WALT recognise different parts of speech.

Nouns are naming words. eg. chair, book, July, Awhi

Adjectives describe nouns.

Eg. wooden chair, writing book, freezing July, lovely Awhi

Verbs are doing words.

Eg run, walk, jump, skip, chew

Adverbs describe verbs.

Eg. briskly running, slowly walking, jumping high, skipping happily and chewing noisily.

EXAMPLES

1. the cat is sad.
2. the black cat is awfully sad because it has no other friends to play with.

3. the cat is sad because it has no home and no where to sleep.

1. The bird is angry. 
2 the  bluey-blackish bird is very angry. 
3 the mean bluey blackish is staring at its mean terrifying furry prey.